Door Open

I left the door open all night
so my spirit could go forth
and wander to & fro in the earth

She was a prairie schooner
sailing across fallen leaves
she danced with Bertolt Brecht

She saw that Mars
described one horizon
Saturn defined the other

She dreamed her way
across the dewy loam
to watch leaves melt into sunrise

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Second draft. Does it still need work?